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Improve Review

The show was fun and as an actor I did learn something from this production. For improve It was very important to accept the concept that your partner gives you. This principle was repeated multiple times but sometimes is hard to achieve. There are moments that the things the partner says would step out of the comfort zone so it is important to leave yourself on stage and forget about the person you really are. The other thing I learnt is the comedy is really about the pace. Pick a fast paced theme is more important than being funny. Most of the time the immediate reaction to the theme is what make the theme funny, not the jokes that you prepared for months. However, if the pace is slow, the thing will get boring quickly because it loses its excitement. I also learnt that, the difference between the first and the last night was the volume of the audience. If the second night has more audience, it is more likely that people will cheer for the stupid things. As long as there is bigger la...

Written Course Work Suggestions

The written coursework that I had two months ago was chaotic. It was more like a heap of thoughts rather than an organized essay. According to the rubric, couple improvements will make the essay better. The format of the essay is the easiest one to revise. I did not have a title and the word count. Also, I should include proper citation for the book. This will help me to gain 10 more points. The second easiest thing to fix is to add a conclusion to my essay. A conclusion is vital for an essay. After paragraphs of discussing the improvements of the performances, I need to have a conclusion to link the essay back to my thesis and make more connections between the literary analysis and my performances. I did not have a conclusion in the essay is because of the word limit. Thus the word count is also a problem for my essay. I talk about the details in my performance a lot. However, I mention about the music choice too much. There are some parts that are unnecessary as well. For the ...

Poetry performance video

https://youtu.be/pWPIlouz-cc