Strength, Weakness, and Revision
I’m still proud about the plot of the story. However, there are many weaknesses on the script, performance, technology, transitions, and memorization. In terms of the script, the revision and addition will happen during the winter break. We might abandon the guy’s death scene for shorten the play duration. We will add a monologue/solo for Lili she she sees guy’s corpse if we did not delete guy’s death scene. I will also add a transitional monologue as an outsider during Nan’s costume change. However, if we could design a faster costume change for Nan, we don’t need to add the monologue. Singing parts of the play will be extended, and there will be on stage transitional music. For now the play is plain. On the other hand, revision in the second part is needed. Little guy seems too cruel, and we need a reasonable explanation why he could not take mama and the girl with him to go to America. In terms of performance, the contractions between guy and little guy is not significant enough...