First Draft Evaluation

Evaluation:

3, 8, 3


Criterion A:
1. Good analysis in some places.
2. Possibly confusing, maybe more explanation for the play as a whole. Why Tom feels regret? the relationship between family members, etc.


Criterion B:
1. Good illustration of the performance
2. Some unclear analysis that go back to the literary analysis?
3. Less talk about music choices?


Criterion C:
1. Grammar errors and typos
2. Not accurate word choices and some confusing words

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