Feed Back

I received many feed backs that saying we did fine in expressing the emotion, and I think the communication between me and Amanda is good. I think this is because we put the lines and the reactions together, which makes us speak more like the characters in the book, and talk more normally. Despite the communication part, I think the emotion change and the message that needs to be conveyed in the monologue is absent. Without communicating, the monologue is talking to the self. I think I did not know the character well enough. I know Tom is regret to the family, but I do not know the scale of this regret. When he started feeling regret? The question will be crucial for the transition between the last scene and the monologue that follows. I need to deeper analyze the lines in the monologue, especially the “for nowadays the world is lit by lighting.” Does Tom want to leave Laura behind or no?

In addition, I received feed backs that I did not do well in term of the blocking. I received suggestions that I should not turn too much. I will try to keep myself still if needed and practice more in the monologue part. 


Ps: we might need Laura to turn on the music player in the first scene?

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